PAGE ONE
(6 panels)
The following
scene will be a remake of the final scene from Back to the Future Part 3:
Panel 1. An all
black panel. Printed in the center of the panel are the words:
ŅSunday
October 27, 1985
1:21
PMÓ
Panel 2. Close
on a picture, being held by Marty who is off-panel. It is of Marty and Doc,
standing by the Old West clock, in their Old West apparel. Marty has just
unwrapped some brown paper from the picture and is looking at it for the first
time.
Panel 3. On
Marty, in the Old West clothes he wore at the end of part 3. He smiles up at
Doc, off-panel in his time train. Jennifer Parker stands next to Marty.
MARTY:
ItÕs great, Doc!
Thanks!
JEN:
Doctor Brown?
Panel 4. Jen
approaches Doc, who sits in the doorway of the time train, and she unfolds a
piece of paper and shows it to him.
JEN:
I brought this
note back from the future and now itÕs erased!
DOC:
Of course itÕs
erased!
JEN:
But what does
that mean?
Panel 5. Close
on Doc, smiling warmly on the couple.
DOC:
It means that
your future hasnÕt been written yet. No oneÕs has!
DOC:
Your future is
whatever you make it. So make it a good one. Both of you!
Panel 6. Marty
and Jen watch as Doc stands up and turns around back into the train, his
family, Clara, Jules and Verne, stepping in before him.
MARTY:
We will, Doc!
DOC:
Stand back!
PAGE TWO
(6 panels)
Panel 1. Long
shot. Marty and Jen look up at the train as Doc sticks his head out a window
and looks at them. The doors to the train have snapped shut.
MARTY:
Where you going
now, Doc? Back to the future?
DOC:
Nope! Already
been there!
Panel 2. Doc
closes the window and the trainÕs wheelÕs fold under the train and it is
propelled into the sky!
Panel 3.The
following should be a series of panels. The train swings around so the back is
facing the panel and an explosion from the rear thrusters is seen.
SFX:
WHOOSH!
Panel 4. In the
distance, the train swings around to face the panel once more, having been
thrust to the rear of the panel.
Panel 5. The
time train now takes up nearly the entire panel as it barrels directly at the
reader, discharges emanating from the locomotive to indicate temporal
displacement.
SFX:
Woooo!
SFX:
BOOM!
Panel 6. Long
shot as Marty and Jen look up at the sky, fire tracks apparent where the time
train was formerly.
TITLES
& CREDITS:
The
Unwritten Laws Part I
Aaron
Jenkins Š writer
TBD Š everything
else